A girl loving and liking
only the dunken dough-nut, waffles and malt,
Knowing the nature of world odd and snide,
Found comfort in things that never came to halt,
Having a kind, gentle and childlike heart,
She remembered each action of others,
Having deep emotions and sentivity being her nature’s part,
In the era of liking for materialistic possessions,
She was fond of, an admirer of, art
Alpines, trees, snow-flakes, waters, jungles, birds,
animals not put in a cage or cart,
She loved the poetry of nature
Yet aiming, for her goals keenly, with a surreal dart.
She had the innocence to dream like cyndrella,
Waiting for her prince charming,
but she got many a fake of princes
that made her senses more alarming.
Unlike the story of romeo n juliet,
She loved yet did not get the same in return,
which made her emotions, deep in her psyche churn,
She already had the wounds of the past
but they made them even more burn.
There came the king,
There came the silent lover,
There came someone with an obsession,
There came someone with power,
Though they lied n tried,
showed her their gullible pride,
But always her inner voice became her guide.
‘You can’t mess with a girl like that’
was her love song for whole of her life,
All she wanted was to be, for once,
one’s best friend and lover,
not to take up her burdens,
but to stay present with her in her strife.
(16th Nov, 2019)
I relate to this very much. Amazing poem!
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Glad to know that..Thank you for reading n appreciating..
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This hit so close to home, I actually shed a tear. So beautiful!
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Thank you so much..I am glad that it felt so relatable to you..
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I really love the way that you put this poem together.
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Thank you so much, means a lot.. ππ
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You are very welcome. Please know how much people of today need to read articles that are as well prepared as are the ones that you post.
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That’s very kind of you….ππ
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Beautiful π
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Is your name Preet?
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Yeah.. Full name is Preet Inder. π
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Beautifully written poem. Trueness to self require effort but it will always payoff .πβ€οΈ
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Thank you and well-said.. β€π
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